kya hota.....(in HINDI)

Not in DEVANAGARI script.

====kya hota====
Copyright ©pushkar prabhat, 2014

meri kismat har roz,
Khilwaad karti hai mere sapno se.
Sochta hu kya hota agar,
Maine isse samjhauta kar liya hota.

Wo kehte hai har pehlu ka ulat,
Ek pehlu sachai hai jaruri hai.
Sochta hu kya rota agar,
Hasna chor diya hota.

Usi khuda se,
Jisne jahannum hai mukarrar ki,
Puchta hu kya hota agar,
Achchayi pe kalam ko rok liya hota.

Kuch samjhte hai,
Mai shayar hu mujhe aata hi kya hai.
Puchta hu kya sunta agar,
Maine bhi panja chun liya hota.

Dil ki raah pe,
musibatein koi raaz nhi.
Sochta hu kya hota agar,
Apno ne hi saath de diya hota.

Apne karam ka toh,
Sabko hi bhugatna hai.
Sochta hu kya jeeta agar,
Khud ka hi saath chor diya hota.
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Reviews

[Penny]

Har 4 lines apne aap mein 1 bahot gehri baat keh jati hai. Shayar toh aap hain hi toh har nazm ka khubsoorat hona bhi lazmi hai. Bahot khoob. Yun hi likhte rahiye.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Is zarra-nawaazi ke liye shukriya. Hame badi khushi hai ki aapko hamari koshish achi lagi.

[Penny]

Aap toh khalis urdu bolte hain! Aisi zuban toh aaj lucknow mein bhi kisi ki nahin hai. Aur yeh nazm mahaz koshish nahin ek shayar ki kismat ki lakir ki tarah jo usne khud banayi hai.

[Linda alexander]

Great write, enjoyed, keep going

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much.........!

[Linda alexander]

You most welcome, take care

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Take care......:):)

[Penny]

God linda! I had no idea, you knew Hindi.

[Penny]

No. Its geeat to know all about you. Must say ypu have real thirst for knowledge. Actually I'm not very different either. Partly British and Partly Indian I know fluent English and Hindi. Being half Punjabi I know some of that too and as a Lucknowite I am just passionate about Urdu. I Plus I have read Sanskritin shool for some time so I can comprehend that and I like to earn languages so I learnt some phrases from Chinese, Japanese, Thai, Italian, French, Spanish and few other Indian languages but that is not true knowledge, I probably could speak two to three words in all these tounges..
So thats me.

[Linda alexander]

Nice to talk to you, take care

[Linda alexander]

I am a simple lay man, not a poet, writing as hobby, very recently started

[Penny]

Me too. I started three years back only. Though, I can say its in my family. My grandfather is a published story writer and writes wonderful poetry and my mom too scribbles, mainly 'Sher'. And thats how I think I got it.

[Linda alexander]

Good luck with writing field, but you may have another area as career, take care

[Penny]

Really! What career?

[Linda alexander]

Anything as a back up you may choose, and which may give you average income

[Penny]

I am studying psychology and people get frank with me easily which I like. So I think I've got a shot at being a counselor.

[Linda alexander]

As far as you can bring an income to support you absolutely fine in my perspective, but at end of college getting a job is not easy now a days, so keep that also in mind, finish what you started

[Penny]

Yes. I am reminded of that quite frequently.

[Penny]

Yes. I am reminded of that quite frequently.

[Linda alexander]

Good luck Penny