Mai Peeche Chor Aaya Hu(in HINDI language)

Not in DEVANAGARI script

====Mai Peeche Chor Aaya Hu====
Copyright ©pushkar prabhat,2014
Anderi surangein, nadiyo, parvaton ko mai peeche chor aaya hu.
Ek daur se chala hu jindagi ki rail pe,
Nakaamiyan, aansu aur gam ka wo waqt mai peeche chor aaya hu.

Jindagi jua ho ya uska lekha jokha,
Daao pe to har waqt khushiyan hi rahi, rahegi.
Bus jahan izzat gawayi, un addon ko mai peeche chor aaya hu.

Fareb is jahan me kuch sachcha nhi,
Humne apno ke naquab bhi har roz utarte dekhe hain.
Nhi, pura sacha to nhi, haan mukhaute saare mai peeche chor aaya hu.

Waajib nhi hote kismat ke faisale,
Mehnat jinda rakhti hai jeet nhi dilaati, to shram ko saath.
Par anjaam ke aandaaz, afwaah, waade mai peeche chor aaya hu.

Apni galti ki saza milti hai,
Par kaun kehta hai sirf khud hi ko,
Apne gunahon se jalti kuch bastiyan mai peeche chor aaya hu.

Ruka tha, roya tha,
Paristhitiyon se haar gardishon me jo khoya tha.
Wo kamjor mai, ab mai peeche chor aaya hu.

nayi subah tum apne paas hi rakh lo,
Mujhe andhro se gurej nhi thehraao se hai.
Isliye puraane har thikaane, mai peeche chor aaya hu.

Reviews

[sapna sagar]

shreshth.....................

[Pushkar Prabhat]

bahot bahot dhanyawaad!!! :) :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

WOW! It's Motivational PoeM! LOVE IT!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

bahot shukriya............!!!! :) :)

[Rounak Jain]

wow. too good. i could not understand"Mehnat jinda rakhti hai jeet nhi dilaati, to shram ko saath." .. "Apni galti ki saza milti hai, " this para was a punch.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

bahot shukriya........!!! :) :)

[M.A.Rathore]

You did well that you have left all that was not yours truely. Man learns much in betrayal. She was not destination yet it was good to leave her.If she would loved you, you would have not left her and even her street. Lead your life as you want to. It does not much matter who remembers you or not. Your dark days has spent. So begin your life again ..I like your poem.
Thanks for sharing....

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much sir................it means a lot!!!! :) :)

[M.A.Rathore]

Though I am well-versed in Hindi yet I expressed in English.. If it doe not matter..

[Pushkar Prabhat]

no sir..........its alright for me! :) :)

[M.A.Rathore]

Let's have a few lines for your love...
Ye ehsaas hai hamhen
Ki unko bhi ehsaas hai,read moreLet's have a few lines for your love...
Ye ehsaas hai hamhen
Ki unko bhi ehsaas hai,
Door-door rahkar bhi
Dil ke paas hai........
(M.A.Rathore)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

waah..... bhaut khoob Rathore sahab!! bahut khoob!!

[M.A.Rathore]

Door- door juda-juda...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

sir ek bakaayada puri hindi poem ho jaaye..........!!!

[M.A.Rathore]

One more from my pen..

Vo kahte hai humse
Ki har nazar pyaar nahi hoti,
Hum kahte hai unse
Ki mohbbat hai izhaar nahi hoti........

[Pushkar Prabhat]

umdaa sir!!! waah!!!!!

[M.A.Rathore]

Jarur ...pahe ek aur....

Tun pyaar kare na kare
Kya gila hai mujhe esaka,
Gar tarphkar jaan bhi de dun
Kya gila hai tujhe eska......
(M.A.Rathore)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

waah!!! kya baat hai..........!!! aapko bhi hindi ka keeda kaat gaya...........hindu urdu ki kavitaon ka maja hi niraala hai!!!

[M.A.Rathore]

Han bhai han ...
Eshi jagah kaata hai ki bata nahi sakte....

[Pushkar Prabhat]

hehe.......are sir,,,,,,,bus bus!!

[M.A.Rathore]

Gar karta koi bevaphayi
To duniyan mein koyi Taj nahi hota,
Fir koyi aashika apni
Mahboiba ke liye nahi rota....
(M.A.Rathore)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

waah waah!!! waah waah!!!

[M.A.Rathore]

Thanks..kaviraj

[Pushkar Prabhat]

are sir is nacheech ki to himmat bhi nhi..........Kaviraj aap ho!!

[M.A.Rathore]

Nahi bhai nahi...
Kisi kavi ki kavita sun ne wala mahan hota hai....es liye aap mahan ho bhai....

[Pushkar Prabhat]

bado ki baat nhi taalte........aap kehte ho to maan hi leta hu.......shukriya aapka!!! :p :p

[M.A.Rathore]

Ye huyi na mardon wali baat....