A very unique approach, really liked it a lot, love, occean, moon light, rising sun, hues of sun, phoenix bird, rain, clouds, heart all are poet's favorite but love is at the atop among them
the word choices that you used to describe this phenomenon are fitting, clever, vivid, and affecting.. there is such deep, profound truth in your words here.. I like how you have this formatted.. the different sides to an experience.. the differing views- when added together make up the whole.. it is the sum of its parts, but each hold something special.. love is everything.. well done my friend.. this is lovely..
thank you so much April........this seemed a little childish to me when i wrote it( though there is .. read morethank you so much April........this seemed a little childish to me when i wrote it( though there is nothing bad in that, i guess!)......but now i am relieved!!!
So glad you liked it!!!
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10 Years Ago
you're more than welcome my friend.. nope.. don't see childish in it at all.. :)
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