====Earthy Path====

a necklace for one beauty's neck.......

====Earthy Path====

copyright@pushkar prabhat, 05/04/2015

 

In Union

with the valley,

delicately contouring down,

the twin, glorious peaks.

 

A Path.........

luring

round a mystical majestic hill........

leading to

places inhabiting angels:

 

twin ranges,

you can whisper your secrets to.....

 

twin cliffs,

where  landslides land, in the hands of love.....

 

up to a lip,

to lands of pleasure and beauty.....

 

the other side,

at the edge of velvet rain forests.....

down to a sea of calm, serene, sensual hypnosis.....

 

i wish to traverse.....

this path, divine,

so many a time,

beyond numbers can count,

in this lifetime!

Author's Note

trying something new.......did ya like it???

Reviews

[fattycbreezy52]

Wow.It's a close scrutiny of nature.Beautiful depiction of nature plus a walking talking scenery free!!!!!!!!!!!!Woah.
great use of imagery and playfulness.It will be good as a slow-motion-lively-nature-movie .Though there is nothing as such but your poem stands out!I love every curve or turn your language takes and nowhere is the link broken!It's yes......Flawless!Ciao

[micky]

this is beautiful Pushkar..... well done

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thanks a lot dear poet!!! :) :)

[Leena Madhuri]

ya i liked it!! :) you use new words in each of your poem! thats so beautiful!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much..........really appreciate it.................!!! :) :)

[prajakta]

beautiful write..:)it draws the reader in..!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much!!! :) :)

[Ana B.]

hmmm....an enticing path that's luring every reader. Beautiful and original :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much Ana.............really means a lot!!!! :) :)

[Shubham Joshi]

ya i liked it, i would love to go to a place as this

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much...........although this place is exclusively for me.......so sorry!!! :P :) :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

Different actually too different. Inspirational :p (lol you know why) thanks for sharing. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

hehe...........thank you so much kind poetess.............glad to have inspired you!!! :) :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

You're welcome :)

[Rajat malik]

You are a nature lover.....#i like it

[Pushkar Prabhat]

thank you so much.......kind poet..............however this is about someone's neck..........necks are created by nature indeed......... :) :)

[Jamestown]

Another great imagery filled piece, with nature as a the focus
and a couple twists! Very creative great wording and format
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Thank you so much Sir.......it means a lot!!! :) :)