Slipping Away.

This actually kinda explains me.

My sanity is slipping. There is no gripping onto the ledge of faith anymore. My thoughts. My mind. It's getting too full. Too heavy. My fingers are straining with the weight of my mind. It's hard, so hard to hold on. I'm slowly going insane and nobody can see. Nobody understands. Nobody knows my mind, not even me. I'm slipping. It won't shut up. It won't leave me alone. Help, make it stop, make it be quiet. I need to go now.

Reviews

[Rahul]

Nicely penn'd, you got your skills.

[Zelle]

u have got a dynamic writing there, full of emotions! I liked how it proceeds elaborating on to the slipping part.. thank u for sharing! :)

[Guilt]

As we get older our load becomes greater. A couple of years from now you'll see this time as lighter period. Things get heavier, but life isn't about losing the load, it's about learning to hold more. Keep writing the angst, the trueness of you current war becomes a history lesson for your own experience. Diary-style poetry is something I wish I could still do. Keep writing, come rain or sunshine :)

- Cloud

[Patrick O'Neil]

Wow, this is very deep.. and and a soft cry for help at the end.I can fully relate, did something similar called it "Depression". but overall, a great write,i personally would have made the structure different but i spose the long drawn out structure has symbolic meaning of someone that has been on a long road, too long. Great write.