Uneasy

Uneasy

A Poem by theunionisloud

I'll never forget
Your
Electric presence 
Its defeaning silence
cannot be denied
Your eyes promised 
Depth, Hope
What your heart would not 
All of eternity
To be lived 
In every moment
I hear the riff
of your soul.
My soul, its harmony 
And next to your Brilliant
Melody
the harmony, 
My harmony did
blend
so well
it
disappeared. 
But I'm here
Now.
And 
Now. 
When I hear
Your riff
Your melody,
the punishment. 
Your eyes promised nothing but the past. 
And now, all I hear is void
transient
Harmony. 

© 2011 theunionisloud


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A very good read...excellent writing in this poem. ~Ev

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is....amazing. You combined two of my favorite things together. Music, and poetry. What a piece if art you have created! "I'll never forget your electricty prescene..." If that doesn't pull people in, I don't know what does. Now I need to go listen to a sad love song, but it will compare nothing to this. Love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 4, 2011
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