Grace

Grace

A Poem by theunionisloud

One ear is a gift
And I'm granted two. 
A single voice breaks the silence, 
And suddenly an entire choir,
Orchestra
intensifies.

Nothing passes perfectly,
But its enough to know that it could. 

One friend is a gift, 
And I'm granted you. 

© 2011 theunionisloud


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Good Friendships are great...which you beautifully portrayed in your poem. Excellent.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Resonates with joy that only a true friend can bring...And oozes the bliss that acknowledgement of such a friendship brings....Precious...Beautiful...

Posted 13 Years Ago


There is such a rich treasure found here... Thoughts that drift over those gifts we are granted in the joy of grace... and a friend, oh how a friend is the best gift of all... Beautiful...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short and sweet.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I do like the premise of this poem and the last two lines. I'm not sure that I appreciate (on just a single reading) how the second stanza advances the theme - it seems a bit unrelated to the rest of the poem. Whatever, its might be better as it's. Great work on this and others I've looked at since Dinesh pointed me this way.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 4, 2011
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