Blind

What has my fingernail seen

which my Eyes 

have not.

A wash of

misconceptions, miscommunications

b l u r the fine lines of reality which

ConvergE

my faultless intuition 

with

deceitful reality

Dependance on Earthly sensation runs

far

too deep for an Earthly stimulus

What has my fingernail seen

which my Eyes

have not.

Remove me from me,

Call me perfect. 

Reviews

[OT]

I like the idea of "what has my fingernail seen" - i took it to mean what have I experienced/felt/touch that evades the eyes! the eyes only paint the picture, they give little depth!! "remove me from me" indeed!! nice work!!

[Nimbus Thread]

Interesting way to see the self as self. There is an immediacy here that's contagious.

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Cool!