A little machine, a little humanity

A little machine, a little humanity

A Poem by theunionisloud

To utter but a few words that arrest your mind:
What 
are you looking for? 
What
motivates your search?
What
answers do you seek?



Stop.


To catch you when you slip on what's right
and fall for what's wrong. 


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© 2015 theunionisloud


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really really dig this. it catches me at the right time, as I too am experimenting, and l love the way this is both nonsensical and "serious".

My only gripe would be "baby" - I think you should leave whoever's being addressed a mystery, much like this piece.

I esp like those last two "lines". awesome.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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really really dig this. it catches me at the right time, as I too am experimenting, and l love the way this is both nonsensical and "serious".

My only gripe would be "baby" - I think you should leave whoever's being addressed a mystery, much like this piece.

I esp like those last two "lines". awesome.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well, I like it..... but I don't know what it is.... for me, it's the "why" questions that really mess me up... interesting configuration of random letters and numbers interposed that way, reminds me of code breaking.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I love when someone thinks outside the box. I am adding to general reading to mull over this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A neat and entrancing little monstrosity, to say the least.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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