Supernova Fallout

My first try at something lighthearted and romantic.

We start with the
Crackling record of “Gloomy Sunday”
Playing in the background
The melody goes on slowly
Bare feet moving carefully
to the romantic sound
300 sextillion stars surround us
Intangible moments, we feel
And the intimacy becomes surreal
The taps of raindrops mimicked our excited spirits
We were two melted hearts dancing
in the blazing candlelight
With only a gust of wind
from what seemed like
300 sextillion supernovas
I danced alone
forgetting the place we used to call home

Reviews

[Dave]

Yes, I find this to be truly romantic. Most of what I write, whether poetry or stories, are romantic.
Keep up the good work.

[MsJewel]

"Two melting hearts dancing", so beautifully soft and romantic. I love it. :) Julie

[Drcicarlo]

Thank you Ms. Jewel. I appreciate your time and I value your review. It was my first poem that wasn't completely dark.