Hell and Heaven

Hell and Heaven

A Poem by BeetleBug
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Diamente

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Hell

Hot, cold

Burning, screaming, crying

Fire, Devil; clouds god

Singing, dancing, laughing

Calm, divine

Heaven

© 2011 BeetleBug


Author's Note

BeetleBug
This is not my personal beliefs, but it is someone's. Be mindful.

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I like the way you arranged this one. I don't know if you meant for it to be ironic or if it was purely by accident but having hell on the top and heaven on the bottom was interesting.
But I also liked the way you gave each half and half. Neither got more than the other and you described it very well.
Good job

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on June 14, 2011
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