Disgrace

Disgrace

A Poem by Jose Camacho

If a cloud was made of stone,
I'd have you stoned to death.
When the oceans become fire,
You will kneel down and repent. 

At the end of your tongues,
Words unspoken become a scar.
I will tear the wounds with thorns
And then you will remember.

Twenty years into a filthy lie,
You will be forgotten.
I am stepping on a rat;
That disgrace is you.

I am not the serpent you fear,
For my heart is pure from hate.
Your mind is stacked with guilt,
And you fear yourself at night.

Sins are on you like feathers on a bird.
When you move your body, sins reflect.
In woods of sins and lies I'll hunt,
And now I execute you. 

If a cloud was made of fire,
And the ocean was a stone,
I would tear your wounds with thorns,
And the disgrace shall be forgotten. 

© 2013 Jose Camacho


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A poem reflecting fierce fight using weapons of stones made of cloud and ocean of fire.
What a great imagery !
You have charmed your readers.

Posted 10 Years Ago


You use a lot of strong words to create a very dark atmosphere. Very well done! Thank you for sharing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very emotional and angry poem I would say... Well written... it follows quite well. Keep writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jose Camacho

10 Years Ago

Thanks! It was written after an argument to be quite honest.
A good rant and rave poem...Well done...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jose Camacho

10 Years Ago

Thank you! :)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)

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Added on May 16, 2013
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