Until the Rain Stops

Check out my YouTube channel where I read my poetry from my recent book. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_arvp3Q6C8c

Our love is
bigger than paper.
It's made of flesh and
bone and blood.
Words can't tear it apart.
Distance won't taint it.
My spirit groans
without you.
My soul feels empty
and alone.
I feel like a ghost wandering,
lost, like a blowing leaf.
Grief has become me.
I hunger for you.
Feed me.
I think of you there,
lonely and afraid.
I want to take
you in my arms and
hold you, until the
rain stops.

Author's Note

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_arvp3Q6C8c
Check out my you tube channel where I read poetry from my recent book, Seedy Town Blues Collected Poems, available on Amazon.com

Reviews

[Chris]

This one brought immense sorrow to the forefront of my mind. There ARE moments when we can only bear witness to pains that returned too often within our lives. I guess such pain marks our souls indelibly and our memories - well, they caress our thoughts just to show us what mattered after all.

[Thomas W Case]

Yes, so true. Thanks for reading and commenting.

[mou]

It is beautiful! Yes, only true love can hold until the 'Rain' stops. The faith in dependence has a magic.
- mou

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you so much, Mou. I appreciate it.

[mou]

It is my pleasure

[Poetic Beauty]

Wanting to hold someone who is far away can be daunting and heartbreaking but love can keep hope alive

[Thomas W Case]

Yes, it can. Thank you for commenting.

[Arundass TP]

Love is like double edged sword. Sometimes it.......... Great poem friend.

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you my friend.

[Simbles]

:) nawt bad :) feed me more

[Thomas W Case]

Thanks. I appreciate it.

[John the Baptist]

This one expresses a love of the deepest sort. One does get the hint that some separation has taken place, and the speaker does not have access to the one he loves. Thus the sense of deprivation and desperation, and the deep desire for reunion, so that the rain may stop.

[Thomas W Case]

Thanks, John. Much appreciated.

[poetgurl (Plainly Meg)]

I feel like a ghost wandering,
lost, like a blowing leaf.
Grief has become me.

I really enjoyed this part. I can feel the emotions through out this write.
Nicely written.

[Thomas W Case]

Thank you. I appreciate the comment.

[Pete]

quite deep and telling. speaks from the soul to the soul. a much enjoyed read.

[Thomas W Case]

Thanks, Pete. I appreciate the comment.