Watch Out

Watch Out

A Poem by Thomas W Case
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Here's a link to my you tube channel where I read my poetry. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8k5NY8ZMx3I

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Death winks at the
lilies that smile in
the rain.
He takes her.
The last dirty trick.

Watered drinks and
syphilis doesn't do the
patrons any good.
Too much grief for
placebos and madness.
Relief must come.
Booze and fantasy just
bring sickness, and
licking frogs is
out of the question.

Pipe dreams ease the pain
if you smoke them slowly.
Watch the blue ghost curl
into the feeling fan.

This saloon is home for the
iceman.
So, buy me another drink,
and we can think about
doing it all
tomorrow.
Isn't that right, Mr. O'Neil?

© 2025 Thomas W Case


Author's Note

Thomas W Case
On my YouTube channel, I read from my recently published books, Seedy Town Blues Collected Poems and It's Just a Hop, Skip, and Jump to the Madhouse, both are available on Amazon.

www.thomaswcase.com

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Thomas,
Imagery with subtle, built-in insights, is a special skill, you are good at it, man.
Vol

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

1 Week Ago

Thank you. I appreciate it.
This is real raw Word as it should be written. Bukowski would be proud of you. Really Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you, my friend.
I must say, licking frogs is definitely out of the question. This one is about serious drinking, and it is filled with heavy imagery about the hard drinking life. Yes, for many the saloon is home for the iceman.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you, John.
A most raw and down home manner of speaking and telling of the tale. Great work

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thomas W Case

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you, my friend.

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Added on April 13, 2025
Last Updated on April 13, 2025
Tags: death, dreams, time, pain

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Thomas W Case
Thomas W Case

Clear Lake, IA



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Thomas W. Case was born in Oxnard. He has published 3 volumes of poetry. The Bullfrog Dreams of Flying, Artichokes, Avocados, and Van Gogh, and Seedy Town Blues. He has won several poetry contests. Hi.. more..

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