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A Poem by Mauricio Montoya

I forgot to give you a card
One you never gave me
Sorry I could not remember
Shame on me.
When you thought of me.
To say,
Happy birthday.

© 2024 Mauricio Montoya


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Yeah it does have two meanings, mom and me haven't talk in years but on her birthday I was drunk and forgot about send a card via my sister so I wrote this poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

Posted 4 Days Ago


A very poignant piece….says a lot, but we all make mistakes, unless this was not…. Might be intentional…many ways to view this….
Nice write Mauricio!
Warmly, B

Posted 4 Days Ago


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Added on May 5, 2024
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Mauricio Montoya
Mauricio Montoya

oakland, CA



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Love to draw and cook from time to time, when I'm not drawing I’ll write poems. My favorite poet is Edgar Allen Poe. more..

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