Without World Within

it how you see it

   Without World Within

 

  I yearn for the world to adore me.
  Yet nothing is picture perfect.
  There are times the world will smile.
  While others, it won't stop crying.

  I'd run and hide from my shadow.
  But, its always one step behind.
  As the world sleep, it fades away.
  Only to return, from a different angle.

  My up hill battle when I hit the ground
  as I climb the ladder to reach the sky.
  The silver lining throws me in the clouds.
  It’s a wonder, why the world keeps me around.
                                  By Mauricio Montoya

Author's Note

just something i put together

Reviews

[The Uncommon Muse]

This was very well written and moving Mauricio. At first read, I didn't get the flow but I read it again and took time to savor the words and the visuals and I found it to be beautiful.

[Ashley.M.E]

This is a really good poem, I say that alot, but I have nothing else I can say other then that.

[Art Sun]

Funny how we have a picturesque view of us within this world...filled with battles of emotions and that need for acceptance we strive along with everyone wishing to find that silver lining...

nice work my friend...

oh by the way latter is ( ladder)

[Jacqueline Lopez]

It's very different, but I like that it's heart spoken. Very nice!!!

[MissWordSmith]

alright. when i began reading this piece, i thought, ''what a weird kinda flow to it''
it was unusual.. but as i kept reading it sort or fitted into place. i don't know how you did it but it was unique and it worked. a nice write~!