Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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Pain Alive

Pain Alive

A Poem by TimOjeda15
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Pain is strength.

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Why do we suffer so much
while we are alive? Pain
The ones I love so much,
Go through a lot about such & such.
We fuss a bunch & crunch our teeth
to hide whats on our mind,
and find the light at the end of the tunnel.
Bundled in my heart are the feelings from the past.
Needed a special girl to make the feelings pass.
Well they've passed and I've crash landed
on her world, where a new path has begun.
I will run through each planet finding new meanings,
Discoveries & other things has my heart feening.
Real love is understanding how your womans world works
knowing that this galaxy is only a speckle of dust.
I need to have my own place to call home until
my time where my number is up & say goodbye to my habitat
and home whom I've come to love & trust.

© 2014 TimOjeda15


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TimOjeda15
instagram- @Timothy_Ojeda15

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I enjoyed this, really.
"I've crash landed on her world" reminds me of wanting to be a part of someone without a mellow way of entering their world. I have made many crash landings on many worlds. I also liked "I will run through each planet finding new meanings - discoveries and other things has my heart feening" Just a little of how I feel when I meet a new lover. good piece

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I enjoyed this, really.
"I've crash landed on her world" reminds me of wanting to be a part of someone without a mellow way of entering their world. I have made many crash landings on many worlds. I also liked "I will run through each planet finding new meanings - discoveries and other things has my heart feening" Just a little of how I feel when I meet a new lover. good piece

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 14, 2014
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TimOjeda15
TimOjeda15

New york, NY



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Begginer poem writer just expressing past present future in my life more..

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