Make It Rain (Mature)

Make It Rain (Mature)

A Poem by Choosing Life
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Thoughts That Leave One Drenched

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Little eruptions between my thighs

Cause warm rivers to flow
Uncontrollably
 I melted
Until I felt myself become an ocean
 I wanted you to swim inside me
Until my tides
Caused your mind
To be at ease
Yeah, I wanted you to see yourself
In the waters I released
And how deep
And how deep
Is the flow
Don’t get lost in the tow
For there is safety in my harbor
And I wanted you to swim harder
And row faster
Till orgasmic spasms
Took over
I moved to this internal rhythm
 Letting your verbal expressions
Beat on the drum within me
 Until we both hummed simultaneously
Wanting you to get lost in the mirrors of my soul
Let the worries of your day go
Now my King
Let me take control
I bet we both hit high notes
Tonight
Who said don’t rock the boat
They weren’t rocking it right
As we become melody
Beats and harmony
Orchestrating chemistry
Burning  
And more explosions
Escape through tight thighs
And I think my eyes cry
From pleasure not pain
A smile on my face
As you make me rain
For you

© 2008 Choosing Life


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awwww... someones real naughty at night... when u write this? LoL very.... erotic.... and bone brining to say the least LOL nice write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


How delicious this poem is! Sensuous, seductive, slipping, slithering... an entrancingly enjoyable erotic read!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daaaaaaaaaamn!!! Can I have some of that?!?!?!

Fire poem, wordsmith.

Keep bangin'!!!

*Now my King Let me take control I bet we both hit high notes TonightWho said don't rock the boat They weren't rocking it right...."


WORD.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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