You are...

A shout out to Mia Rockwell who inspired me to write this one.

You are the thief.
Calculating, irritating.
Stealing, leaving, giving me all the trouble.
You take my heart, my feelings are double.

You are the robber.
Violent, not nearly sane.
You came with force and took my voice.
You leave me with nothing, with nothing of a choice.

You are the gangster
Mastermind, free of time
You engraved your name, your philosophy.
I am deep into your syndicate, chained, on death row and never free.

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

I feel desperation with acceptance. I love the word choice and, of course, your honesty. Keep going.

[Mia Rockwell]

Wow I've never inspired writing before.
I really like the last 2 lines, "You engraved your name, your philosophy. I am deep into your syndicate, chained, on death row and never free." The pain of describing someone, to make it so real of the feelings they brought upon you. Great work.

[Tobias Rasmussen]

Thank you very much :) I enjoy reading your stuff :)

[Tobias Rasmussen]

and i do hope it doesn't piss you off that i used some of the wording from your own poem :D