Almighty Being

Almighty Being

A Poem by Tobias Rasmussen

An almighty being,
what is that?
Is it the guy in the heavens
with a beard and a hat.

Does he look like gandalf the white?
Or is he more of a grey?
I hope he won't smite
me, for what I'm about to say.

I chose to believe one thing,
but is my way the truth.
There is Allah and buddha,
and another guy at the jews.

The difference and coincidence
are far and close.
Man, how is my guy
better than that
explanation of yours.

To start with a bang,
or believe you are reborn.
The hindu, the atheist
who knows the truth?

Is it true that everyone sees
a part of the elephant.
It is pointy like a spear?
or big and wobbly like a rear.

Then who is the guy who sees it all?
Man, he is arrogant for sure.
He is so mighty and tall.

Nah, one guy has had to seen
The picture as a whole.
Or else there would be no story
to be told.

But that is arrogant as f**k,
and not very nice.
No matter if you are christian,
buddhist, muslim or some other size.

Don't ever think you know everything.
The christians don't,
and neither the rest of the game.
But that is the reason it is called faith.

Cause up there is god,
or not,
I guess only death will make us
see the change.

© 2014 Tobias Rasmussen


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Nice voice here ... Like you I belive that not one person who walks the arth is better than the next.. not one. Religion, well people need to believe don't they... once one is able to look within then we can ask any question and the answer will come ....

oh hang on what was it that Socrates said .... 'All I know is I know nothing.' or perhaps it was Plato ... ah what do I know anyhow ...

I really like the pace within your poems, I like the feelings they give me too, I can feel the depth within your soul bursting with 'listen to me I have much to say'

as you said to me ... please make sure you get me to keep reading your works ... I like them, much more than most ..

well done you xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tobias Rasmussen

9 Years Ago

It is Socrates :) yes I hope he doesn't give me a copyright strike that would suck xD thank you for .. read more
I really like this, it encourages me to once again look outside the box. Will I or should I say we ever know the truth... or maybe the truth is there we just aren't allowing ourselves to except it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


The picture you chose for this poem is pretty cool.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is simply wonderful. My views exactly, which may be why I like it so much. But it makes you think and hopefully open the eyes of others.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on February 22, 2014
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Tobias Rasmussen
Tobias Rasmussen

Copenhagen, Denmark, Denmark



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I am new. I am young. My writing highly reflects my age and my POV in life. I have no experience writing happy and philosophical stuff. I can write dark and sad stuff since I can do what other young p.. more..

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