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A Poem by Tomi

My heart pants, my soul thirsts

A deep longing within me

Searching for all the answers

From the depths of the sea

To the ends of the earth

Only when I found the Lord,

Then I found peace

© 2010 Tomi


Author's Note

Tomi
Its bout my search for peace, feel free to drop your thoughts.

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Very nice and nice to look up to the man upstairs. Nice writting

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ah, it's beautiful. Short, yet, to the point. Love the last 2 lines! Nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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. it's beautiful that you found it ... and you wrote beautifully about it ...


Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this it may be short, but the picture express well what your getting across as does the whole poem. I love it, it's just beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


IT'S SHORT...
BUT...
POWERFUL...
WELL DONE...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice. Short and concise.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Amen.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I would do absolutely anything for just even a little sense of peace.

I'm glad you found peace.

Posted 13 Years Ago


All of us are forever searching for something to give us peace. This is a very good poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on September 2, 2010
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Tomi
Tomi

Lagos, Nigeria



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