I Hate Valentines Day

I Hate Valentines Day

A Poem by TopHatGirl
"

What a crappy holiday.

"
    The pink and red
makes me dread
Valentine's day,
what child's play.

The happy love,
the little white doves
makes me sick,
a brick wall I shall kick.


The lacy cards,
made by retards,
oh stop with the singing,
and the bell ringing.

Love is not bought with a gift,
My spirits won't lift.
It's not bought with a rose,
that makes me want to overdose.

The pretty dresses, lace and frills,
down my spine, it sends chills.


I wish i could shove
all this love
down a dove's
throat.

Why do you school date?
You won't find a permanent mate.
Just another heartbreak.
They just give and take.


Nobody in February
is going to marry,
no winged fairy,
carrying a bow,
is gonna shoot your hoe,
so just retire,
love is a fire,
it looks pretty,

    but it burns you s****y.

© 2010 TopHatGirl


Author's Note

TopHatGirl
Love=Sucks.

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"I wish i could shove
all this love
down a dove's
throat."
*Smile*
Wonderful Rhyming Scheme.and if thats what you really think of Valentines day , then *Congrats from an Indian*

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ya what Song said. But you have really good point. I had some pretty bad times when I was in grade 7 and I probably would've screamed this at one point. Love the ryhming

Posted 14 Years Ago


Sheesh louise! I knew you didn't feel good, but this is how that b*****d made you feel? Well SCREW him and show him what he's missin' out on! Ahem, for you peverted minds out there... when I say 'screw him' I mean FORGET about the loser and move on in life! Don't sit there crying over someone who's probably tounging another girl in the world... *cringe* No offence Stryks...

Posted 14 Years Ago


Goodness. I think you are very annoyed at Valentines day and so vented your anger and miserableness in a very good poem. I won't say great because it needs some better rhyming but I do get exactly what you mean.
I don't like Valentines Day but to me love does not suck.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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