Blink

Blink

A Poem by topsyturvy
"

Don't blink.. Or you just might miss it.

"

Lost deep in the woods

She grows a fire to numb her hands

She steps apart from holy ground

And falls to the dark lands bemused she smiles

She strains to hold on to the thoughts of her life

She falls again and wipes her smile

She figures she can and so indeed she does

For how long will all this last?

Her sanity falls to brinks of the past

Shattered from beyond

Her words leave aghast

She succumbs to the passion

Her confusion it spreads

 

Do you understand the words I just said?

© 2011 topsyturvy


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I'm hoping this isn't a trick and that this makes me look like a pervert, but I just love a puzzle. Is this an intimate moment where she gives in to passion and desire with a man?

- Guilt

Posted 7 Years Ago


Guilt

7 Years Ago

**That this DOESN'T make me look like a pervert** hahaha.
topsyturvy

7 Years Ago

Yes, something like the "first time" I guess :P See how she's confused yet at the same time there is.. read more

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