You Dont Know ...

You Dont Know ...

A Poem by acid

You don't know...
How I feel
No one does

Constantly at pain,
With no one to talk to

It's hard
Always feeling misunderstood
Wanting to cry all the time

It's not what I wanted
It's not what I decided

So please,
Don't make it harder for me
and at least, try to understand

© 2011 acid


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great noone understands exc. you sometime even you dont so yea

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

acid,

Absolutely!

Forthright you go... along your way make yourself known.

It seems from reading this poem that you know who you are and what you want.

This is clearly a cry for independance. Great job making it known in a clean, productive way.

Have a great day,

Legacy


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Love the powerfulness of this. short and to the point. well written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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acid
acid

Buffalo , NY



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