Penguin (Temporary Title)

Penguin (Temporary Title)

A Story by ToyaPin
"

Feedback naman! Short story ni PJ with recommendations ni Stephen (Ako)

"

      Story:

There was a boy named Brian. He is a 3rd year highschool transferee student .

 

(In his house)

Mother: BRIAN ! WAKE UP ALREADY !!

Brian: OH NO!! It’s already 11:00 o’clock? I forgot to set the alarm clock ..

SFX: Sigh

Brian: Gotta go Mom!!

(Outside)

(Gets on the bike)

SFX: Bike's pedal

He is riding his bicycle so fast he almost hit a small cat and he bumped to a wall and fell on his bike...

SFX: Baaaam ! SFX: Tingtingting  SFX: Meoooow !

Brian: Ow ow ow .. Damn Cat . *Angry*

 

(School)

Adviser: We have a transferee from another school. Come on in now...

SFX: Door

Brian: Hello, I'm Brian Roscoe. Nice to meet you all...

Students: HELLO!!

Adviser: You can take that vacant seat at the back and if you have any problems, don’t hesitate to come and tell me.

SFX: School bell ring

Adviser: Okay, class dismissed and oh, Brian.. May I have a word with you?

Adviser: Brian, I heard you love books. Well our school has a huge collection of books at the library so, I’m inviting you to come by. By the way, would you do me a favor?

Brian: What is it Ma’am?

Adviser: I just want you to return this book to the library. Hey Brian, have you made any friends yet?

Brian: Well, not really.

Adviser: Uhmm... there’s this girl who happens to have the same interest as yours but she doesn’t actually have some friends. Would you mind if I ask you to be her companion?

Brian: Sure Ma’am!

 

Brian went to the library to return the book ..

(Library)

While picking a book, there was a girl on the ladder searching for a book but she suddenly lose control of the ladder and then she fell from the ladder but Brian caught her.

SFX: Duuug Doooog Doooom !    SFX: Kyaaaaaaaa !

Brian: Are you okay ? *stare*

Girl: Y-yea. *stare*

Brian put Louise down.

Brian: [She's beautiful huh ..]  Need help ?

SFX: thug thug ..

Girl: Leave me alone ..

Brian: O-okay ..

SFX: Door

Brian went away .

Girl: [I dont need someone to care for me] *Embarrassed*

Brian: [That was not cool] ..

SFX: Walking

Brian: Oh well, Ill try to visit her again tomorrow.

 

(Day 2 - School)

Brian went to the library again.

SFX: Door

Brian: O-oh hi, you're here again huh ..

Girl: ...

Brian: I'm Brian. Brian Roscoe, nice to meet you ..

Girl: I-I'm Louise. [Why does he care so much ?!]

Brian: You don't have friends ?

Louise: I don't need someone to care for me.

Brian: [She's cold ] Oh I see ..

Louise: How about you ?

Brian: I'm a new student here so I still don't have a friend.

SFX: Bell ring

SFX: Sigh

SFX: Stand

Brian: Oh well, see you later.

Brian went away.

Louise: ...

 

(Classroom)

Teacher: Who is the killer in the story ?

Teacher: Brian !

Brian: ...  *staring at the window*

Teacher: Brian !!

SFX: Stand

Brian: I dont know .

Teacher: *angry* ...

Brian: ...

SFX: Bell ring

Teacher: Class dismissed.

 

He went to the library but he didn't saw Louise .

SFX: Walking

Brian: Where is she ? *worried*

He roamed around the school.

SFX: Running

 

(Rooftop)

SFX: Huff Huff ..

Brian: Is she here ?..

He was suprised when he saw Louise lying on the floor .

He dropped the food that he is holding.

Brian: Louise !! Hey waake up !

He took Louise to the Clinic.

 

(Clinic)

SFX: Knock Knock !

Brian: Excuse me !! Please let me in .

Doctor: What's the prob .. Oh, what happened ?

Brian: Can you heal her?

Doctor: Hmmm... Yes, I think.

(Brian put Louise on the bed)

Brian: I'll buy some food for Louise, take care of her please.

(And so he went away.)

 

SFX: Walking

Brian: ... *Worried* [I hope she's okay]

Brian brought some healthy food outside.

And he went back to the Clinic.

 

(Clinic)

SFX: Door

Brian: How is she ?

Doctor: She's fine...   She suddenly collapsed because of exhaustion due to her fever... She will wake up later. I'll leave you two here for awhile.

SFX: Door

Brian: Louise .. *still worried*

He took the hand of Louise.

While waiting, he suddenly fell asleep.

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And then, Louise woke up.

Louise: B-Brian.

Brian: Louise.

Louise: ...

Brian: I was soo worried about you !

Louise: B-Brian.

Brian: Here, I brought some healthy food for you. It's healthy ..

Louise: T-thanks .

Louise: Brian, C-Can you read this story for me ?  *shy*

Brian: S-sure.

Brian: Childish huh.

Louise: Hmm ?

Brian: Nothing.

Brian: "There was a kingdom of penguin. They lived on a Cold Island, full of ice, cold waters and white liquid rocks. But One day there was a Artic shark. The Artic Shark is really hungry. He likes to eat meat like penguin meats and other fishes. And so, The Artic Shark chased the penguins. On that time, There was so many penguins on the water. And so, the penguins panicked and hurriedly went to the land. But there was a female penguin still on the water. The female penguin is in danger shouting for help .. But no one helped. But there was a one  male penguin who decided to save the other penguin. On that time, the Artic shark was soo close to the female penguin, but the other male penguin was just on time. The male penguin jumped on the head of the Artic shark to confuse it. Then the Artic shark was really confused, the Artic shark chased the male penguin who jumped on his head. The male penguin swam really fast. The male penguin went to the land then he grabbed the hand of the female penguin. And so, The Artic shark went away. The penguin was really happy. And in the end, the two penguins lived together forever .. -- The End.

Brian: How's that?

Louise: B-Brian. Can you be my penguin ?. *shy*

Brian: *suprised* S-suree. *happy* I'll always be there for you ..

Louise hugged Brian ..

 

-- The End.

© 2011 ToyaPin


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Added on August 12, 2011
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