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A Poem by T.C. Banks
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capitalized lines are me. non caps are her

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I Love You
i love you too
I Don't Want This To End
i don't want this to end either
I'm Glad We're Doing This
i'm glad we're doing this too
I See You and Your Husband Are Fighting Again
i know were getting a divorce soon
I'm Sorry To Hear That. Hopefully You and I Can See Each Other More
i lied, i don't love you, i never wanted to do this with you, i'm not leaving him, don't talk to me again.

© 2012 T.C. Banks


Author's Note

T.C. Banks
the 'u' key on my laptop doesn't work very well so if there's a misspelled word maybe there's supposed to be a 'u' there.

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in this i just wanted to show the difference in involvement and importance in a character to relationship type form...if that makes sense. so me, who was into this whole thing was capital whereas she who wasn't in to it as much was just saying what wanted to be heard and therefore was lower case.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like how the story progresses showing this love affair and how things were running smooth. Then the huge let down when the woman says that she never really loved the person she was having an affair with. Great story I liked it. Again the only flaw I see is with capitalization, things that should be capitalized arent and things that shouldn't be capitalized are.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 19, 2012
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T.C. Banks
T.C. Banks

Greenwood, IN



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A Poem by T.C. Banks