Beauty

Beauty

A Poem by T.C. Banks
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Sweat pants, clean face, natural hair, comfy shirt
this is true beauty
super skinny, tight pants, war paint, name brand
this is true beauty
more to love, triple X L, mild make-up, what ever fits
this is true beauty
athletic, pock marked, running shorts, 5 o'clock shadow, glistening abs
this is true beauty
big and round, leafy green, brown trunks, large branches
this is true beauty
four legs, furry all over, long tail, loud bark
this is true beauty
perfect sphere, covered with water, masses of land, warm and sunny
this is true beauty
slowly dying, mass pollution, rising sea levels, warming climate
this is...

© 2012 T.C. Banks


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you make a lot of social statement here and I like the way you put it all together with the common line until the very last one.. this is a complex piece and I had to read it a couple of times.. and then I read it aloud.. this is a good form and will work well in many different instances.. I would keep it in my tool box if I were you..

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on March 19, 2012
Last Updated on March 22, 2012
Tags: Beauty, love, feelings, discriptions

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T.C. Banks
T.C. Banks

Greenwood, IN



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I am 29 years old, I have been writing off and on for over a decade. I appreciate all feedback on my works more..

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A Poem by T.C. Banks