Your on my mind

Now that were done

Gone our own ways

I'm looking back

At all the good days

 

I still remember when

You use to hold me

colse to your body

Telling me that

''You'll never leave me''

 

But now here we are

hating eachother

But yet your on my mind

For 24 hours

Author's Note

this isent my best work,but hope you liked it

Reviews

[whispereversolightly]

Feel some hurt in this, so well expressed.

[Akshat♥]

"Now that were done"..i think you have to change it to
"as everything is over now"..
except this ..this is an awesome poem..
it is nice to know that he is there in your
mind for 24 hours...keep writing:)