Things Left Unsaid

Things Left Unsaid

A Poem by Trish Kyle

Murmurs and whispers
and tweets in twitter.
Guess it started midwinter.
When I  whimpered.

Guess somethings are left inclose.
Not daring to make it show.
Those magical words, untold
here in my little fragile heart I hold.

© 2012 Trish Kyle


Author's Note

Trish Kyle
Your feedbacks would help me realize those things I am not professional at. I am open-minded, I will accept your opinion. :D

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Short, but intriguing. I like your rhyming and word choice. Little poem that says a lot more than you would think.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trish Kyle

8 Years Ago

Thank you for this review, it boost my self-esteemed. :D
such a mysterious little poem. Good poem!:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Trish Kyle

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much!! :D

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Added on August 8, 2012
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Tags: Things Left Unsaid, Poem, Rhyming, Rhymes, Secrets, Keeping, Keepers, Quiet, Silent, Unheard, Unsaid, Unrealized

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Trish Kyle
Trish Kyle

Quezon City, Philippines



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Greetings!! I'm Trisha Kyle Aguilar, a sophomore student from Philippines who has been living in Earth for 14 years since August 04. I write to be heard. more..

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