The dreamer

The dreamer

A Poem by Trivén

They say I'm a dreamer
and call fool.
I am a dreamer
but I am no fool.

In my mind I created a palace
my palace is in ruins.
I make every day the task
laying stone by stone.

I started it a long time ago
by now the half of it's ready.
I'm forty, alone, in a dark cornered alley
but soon my palace is done.

My heads a place with wonderful things
yet no easy way moving those stones.
I have to get my palace in place
so resting is not a choice.

Soon I'll never be alone again
I'll let family stay for free.
In my palace I'll have food and warmth
but I'll share as it's who I am.

I thought I was alone but
I've recently heard voices.
They cannot take my palace away
they can't, I've worked so hard.

Changed have things around me
it's gotten warmer and brighter.
The voices that still are there
have turned my stones into pillows.

My palace's turned soft
but I need to finish it up!
I stress to make it done in time
but my arms stop working, I panic.

I struggle to move my arms an inch
nothing works, they're stuck.
The voices screams, I'm seeing red
a pinch, everything fades away.

I now share my pillow palace unfinished
with all my new friend in here.
Some scream, some drools, one stares at you
one pace but the whitecoats do nothing but write.

© 2013 Trivén


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A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)......................

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

I like it...:)........................
Trivén

10 Years Ago

No deeper thoughts?
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Nope. Just like it...:)...................

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Added on December 5, 2013
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Tags: dream, asylum, crazy, mad, broken, mental

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Trivén
Trivén

Sweden



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