The Forest

original Basho form. Haiku.NO capitals, No punctuation, No syllable count in Basho form. I want to honor the creator of Haiku.

                                            morning forest cool

                                                sun grows hotter

                                                   forest hushed

Reviews

[barleygirl]

It’s so incredible to finally see a true haiku (or whatever variation). Many have tried, but here you’ve captured not just the rules, but the essence of nature imagery & packing those too-few syllables with maximum fullness & no meaningless words. I crave to see such beauty in form (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie