The whale

                                               snow capped mountains gleam

                                                  reflects on waters surface

                                                     whale breaches through

                                             

   

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Once again, the true essence of Haiku, with carefully-selected words to enhance nature imagery & forego any meaningless words. It’s a thing of beauty & I hope you’ll get many “hits” becuz there are a few favorites of mine on this website who like to write haiku, but to me, it’s not really haiku. I can’t tell you how perfect this is & I’m not talking about counting syllables or not capitalizing (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[LanelWilson]

Once again, your imagination is startlingly deep. You're now a top author for me.

[Terry L & Linda L Shuff]

Thank you so very much Lane. I'll be reading more of your works also.

[Terry L & Linda L Shuff]

Thank you for your encouraging words.