Hummingbird

Hummingbird

A Poem by Ty
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Hummingbird

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Surreal,

It seems.

Shadows from beams

And rays of sunlight,

On warm afternoons,

Will always be better.


Colors of rainbow,

Gold, and teal,

That dripped from skies,

The canvas

Would color my hopeful emotions.


Dream.

Sweet Hummingbird sipping truth,

The seeping oil

And drill bits would keep me awake.


Exhausted.

Realizing exhausted

Is not having anyone close to call friend

And in the pond

The reflection you bent backwards for a being,

Only to have the connection questioned.


Surreal,

It seems.

Rays of sunlight

On warm afternoons,

Will always be better.






© 2018 Ty


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This has a certain depth to it, very well written

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree! Loved the art and the poem. It's deep and accurate! You are truly talented!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

another of yours that I like and relate to
you are very talented x

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I think you have captured the writer's soul in this, consumed in creating and at times forgetting to make the human connection. As nature's beauty greets us warmly.

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

you paint a surreal world in this poem that has a lulling quality as well. Love the repetition of the first stanza. Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful artwork and an awesome poem to go with it. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful artwork and amazing words shared my friend. The words hopeful, shiny and a pleasure to read. Thank you Ty for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 20, 2018
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