4:05 am

The sky grows brighter.

Brighter.

Not really growing, maybe stretching.

Opening.

The tearing of a curtain to let in the dawn.

A new day begins.

And here I sit.

Lonely.

Cold.

But Happy.

Reviews

[Andrew'sWonderland]

A beautiful write!!
"The sky grows brighter.

Brighter.

Not really growing, maybe stretching.

Opening.", my favorite lines!! Great Job!!

[Hedra Helix]

oh that's awesome, ;) totally a clearly drawn feeling of common reflection, mornings alive for all of us.

diiig it;)

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This is so wonderful, I like how this is presented, well written like your style

[Kiddx]

This is a wonderful write here, I enjoyed this

The sky grows brighter.
Brighter.
Not really growing, maybe stretching.
Opening.

like this, very well said in just a few words.

[Chad Halle]

you got some great writes man!
this one's interesting- i liked the curtains, was a nice choice- the way words were going i was thinking legs
great piece!

[Anarda Nashai]

This is WONDERFUL. And very relative...it makes me wonder if we were both doing these same things at the same hour. A great account of simple human nature. I LOVE IT! I would love to read more by you.

-Anarda Nashai
author of Despondent
Check out my website at:
www.anardanashai.webs.com!

[Philosophile. (Maddy)]

Your view of the sunrise was really unique and interesting. The way you present the poem is blunt and to the point, yet it's simplicity only intesifies the power of this poem more.