i hope this is over your head(shop)

 

i hope this is over your head(shop)

we are at the hippie shop in the special room and in the case there is a priest

         a circus

a wonderland of things i can't even mention

my best friend points to whips and chains

                   feet and fists

                donkeys

                    sheep and horses

i go back to the circus and i am fixated and she finally agrees because with

     ADD

fetishes come and go by the video cover

 

we call the guy over and point
he laughs and tries to talk us into a sacrilegious one called

             FALLING FROM GRACE

and though it is hard to turn down the opportunity to commit two sins at once

our minds are made up

 

he grabs the one we’re pointing to

studies it

   laughing

      while walking to the cash register

standing there my best friend finally turns red

it's funny man just a gag gift you know

he grins with a look that says

YEAH THAT’S WHAT THEY ALL SAY

whatever

we pay

we totally know we are watching it before it gets wrapped

we get to her house

       we pop it in

  we are greeted with face paint

                                                   bright red noses

 rainbow colored wigs

and other things that would make your christian grandmother have a heart attack

 

then one girl says to the other girl

                      i can't believe the things that come out of your mouth sometimes

to which she replies

                                             you wouldn't believe the things that go in it either

my best friend and I almost die laughing

 

after the bad sex parade i drive home

                and wonder what kind of sick freaks get off to this s**t

 

now i am here and i totally hate this stream of consciousness bullshit

       because it takes two hands to type so fast

Reviews

[Travis Lawrence]

This is hilarious. A circus porno? Are you kidding? Wow.

And it is very stream of consciouss, like broken prose. Interesting form, too, good line breaks.

Have a nice day!

That was good. I liked it. Keep up the great work! I hope to read more poems of yours in the future!