forget me

forget me,

i left you for a reason,

we just wouldn't work,

now you stalk me, and haunt me,

forget me please,

i left you because you hurt me,

leave me alone i want no part in your mascarade,

forget that i was ever part of you,

you can never be with me,

you are too much of a player,

you just want me in bed,

so i can be anuther notch in your headboard,

it will be easy for me to forget you,

but you need to forget me

Reviews

[Trigorin]

You have a good concept, but I think this would have worked better with less emotion behind it. If you told the story with a more matter-of-fact tone, it would have been more powerful, I think.

[Sarah]

thanks, any more info ill be gratefull for. i haven't been writing in awhile and im alittle rusty.