Spectator

Spectator

 

watching you with

your powerful wings;

 

makes this one

so very jealous...

 

for I'm merely,

another featherless spectator

 

3-22-08

Reviews

[mick weller]

Hey,
I was that taken by your thought provoking bet piece that I've come to take a look at this and I'm not disappointed!
Wow - going to check some more of your stuff!
How many of us think like this? To be able to express something as concisely... makes this one...
cheers

[Fran Marie]

A beautiful piece expressed so nicely and well penned in so few words~Fran

[Robert Luna]

I really love the way you write and capture such a raw energy among your words. You tell a tale so vividly that anyone that reads your words is able to see them and feel them other than just read them. They do not remain just laying upon a page they take a life of their own. It is always a pleasure to read your words.


Well Done!!!!!

[Tania Leigh]

I enjoyed this very much, and I love that you let the reader ponder whether the winged object of the speaker's admiration is a majestic bird or an angel...

Nice work!

[Norma J. Jessee]

James my friend, how do you do it ? You say so much with so few words. In this verse you are the one with wings and I the spectator. I envy your way with words.

Very clever since you can apply this to many different things.

Beautiful write.

[Carrie Montgomery]

another easy- to- read, powerful poem. I liked this one b/c you left room for the reader to use the imagination. Good job.

[None]

What a true gift it would be, to be able to fly. No feathers - no flying! The incredible thoughts that abound with your writing are endless. Your poem contains so much beauty in your words.

[THE BLACK SEAL]

deep and nicely done

[jen -- JG]

You always manage to convey the deepest thoughts and provide great imagery with few words.

Good writing - well done

jen-JG

[Janyce Helen Van Es]

Makes me think of a metaphore- John Doe is watching his single friend party while John has to go home to his wife and kids and face responsibility. Course you probably mean something entirely different. Birds maybe?

Nice poem; short and sweet.

[The Elder Pine]

Glad to be reading you again my friend, you always have been so concise and accurate with your words and ideas, it is a pleasure my friend. Great write as always.