Cherry Lips

Cherry Lips

 

tasty is the word,

 

when I think

of your cherry lips...

 

4-5-08

Reviews

[vanishing]

Tasty cherry lips
That is classic romance
sure to capture any Woman's heart
Nicely done james
A pleasure to read

[None]

A very sweet poem! It sounds like she's got that flavored lip gloss on. Or probably just natural! Great poem.

[justjenn_2u]

An abbreviated piece, direct and to the point. I like the tantalizing effect of this.

Good job!

[Sally Edwards]

Short,sweet, and very tasty LOL, I like it

[mick weller]

Hey man,
I loiter?
...I think - (but I hasten to add this is just a non-poets opinion)
that you have to have at least 4 lines (?)
I linger?
man - your stuff is so annoyingly simple!
- you write faster than I can review!

I loiter,
when I think

- but then you can get arrested for loitering..?
Wait till you meet the Bard of Rotherham...