Full Moon

Full Moon

A Poem by Douglas Lyle
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Created: January 26th, 2005

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I'll return when
     The tides are in
When our lives are
     Without it's sin
The binding hills in which
     We laugh at age and time
Mindful strangers
     But tending crime

 

 

The war will be ready

© 2008 Douglas Lyle


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I wonder what the war is about. At one point I imagined the planets say it is between the daughters and their fathers. A nice contemplative, succinct write. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 15 Years Ago


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Very lovely. So poetic.

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