Deja Vu

Deja Vu

A Poem by D. Pesek

Sometimes I truly wonder,
If my mind is sinking under,
A sea of dark confusion,
Leaving nothing but illusion.

I know not the time,
I saw this place,
nor heard these sounds,
or kissed that face.

Nor why it is,
that this was lost,
like fallen leaves,
in winter's frost.

Sometimes I truly wonder.

© 2012 D. Pesek


Author's Note

D. Pesek
I wanted to express the feeling of deja vu without over-thinking it. So I gave myself just five minutes to write a poem. As it turns out, this took me just a hair over three. Enjoy.

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EWell this peom described the feeling perfectly. I loved the flow and how poetic it was. great write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


I liked the second stanza the best. I always have to slow down to catch the true meaning of the line. Your writing is very mature. Good job

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This flows very well. I love the idea of Deja Vu and the last line is really effective.
Well written :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the flow of this poem; how short it is yet to the point. Bravo, good sir. Writing points for you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great job mate! I often wonder too! But could never come up with this pithy piece of poetry!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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