Tell It Like Its Fizz

Save your breath for the waters
Speak in bubbles of sound
Lies are heavy and certain
to weigh you down to drown
Be an orb of air with direction
Rise above and have purpose
Clear and crystal truth
will always reach the surface
Tell it like liquid
and tell it like it is
Talk the tingle of truth
Tell it like its fizz

Reviews

[Angi]

Tell it like it fizz. Love that! Refreshing way to look at truth. Angi~

[lee von cleef]

to learn to spell Albuquerque, took me till 5th grade I had had the fizz of champagne by then.

[Elvis Gilley]

Great...e. Good job on the creativity...

[jinxxnij]

Ha! This was great. Always a pleasure reading your work

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it's too bad truth is so often just watered down attempts to present a persona that really doesn't exist.

truth usually does rise to the surface, but often without our help....it just does.

nice poem

[Astro]

Interesting comparison, unique really I don't think I've read anything along the same lines. For that reason alone I think you have something here. Thoughtful and full of imagination.

[MoriartyMesa]

Tell it like liquid


i dig it.

[kublakhan27]

A very interesting concept...great piece.

[Simon Welsh]

Rain, rain go away. This is nice.

[gombeggar]

nicely done...so much truth comes out in seltzer...or can so anyway at thymes