When you know my heart?

When you know my heart?

A Poem by umesh

 I wish you could read my heart
and touch all my feelings there
then you would know me
and will start to care

your eyes were the only serene eyes
i never see before
those are only belongs to me
heart murmur so so

Relationship was nameless we had
my love was blooming perfect
but all you did was
cheat to a innocent heart

yet forgiveness was in my heart
to offer you as my beloved love
but time and again
you moves to different direction

yet my love remains
without loosing its precious value
but my dear
when do you understand
you are my life ...

© 2011 umesh


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I like the soft and gentle desire of this poem. Felt like a whisper. I like the story in the poem. The battle to hold on can be very difficult. The ending made this poem complete. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Well Done! Keep it up! Do u read mine 2 TIME and ANGUISH..if possible then gives ur review.. U can also add me on facebook

Posted 7 Years Ago


If only..... we could see inside each other or even read each others thoughts there may be less hurt in the world and a little more compassion. But alas, that is not the case, or we are just too overcome with the emotion of greed and selfishness to care about how others may feel of our words and actions.

Touching write. Nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


a lovers plea.... yes I understand... you expressed very well here!! keep it up!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like the soft and gentle desire of this poem. Felt like a whisper. I like the story in the poem. The battle to hold on can be very difficult. The ending made this poem complete. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very romantic!! A beautiful piece of writing:-)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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umesh

colombo, buddhism, Sri Lanka



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