Not the Computer Geek

Some called me a computer geek

I didn't know as much as some seemed to think

Instead it was like going out inside my head

Feeling alive in a life that was dead

Looking around for that someone to meet

Needing a reason to get up from my usual seat

Feeling the waves before I go out

The rest of the world I kind of shut out

Needing that place that really is home

Never again wanting to be all alone

The search I thought would never end

Until a simple e-mail she chose to send

It wasn't long before I'd understand

I was destine to be her only man

Like a breath of home when your far away

And the only reason for you stay

Now I sit back and contenplate

Lucky for me I wasn't to late

Now I am Happy as a pea in the pod

I thank her and Almighty God

 

 

An Uncle Charlie Original

 

 

 

Reviews

[Serend1p1ty]

I really liked this poem.
The sad tones are countered by the rhyming scheme, I don't know if this was on purpose or not, but it was really cool to read.
Secondly, I think you made a typing error with the following line:
"I didn't know as much as some seemed think" - You forgot to add the "to" into it?
Should it read: I didn't know as much as some seemed TO think ?
Other than that, it's a great poem.
Just as an afterthought, maybe a stronger ending would help? It sort of leaves the reader wondering if he/she missed a line or something.
But great work, it truly is.