smile

wrote this after tear..please review

a tale of forever
enticing vow forgotten
frigid soul broke
trapped in asylum
locked in vexed emotion
cast the black and white
let the pain linger
i forced a smile

Reviews

[Robyn]

ahh yes. the faked smile that we can all relate to at some point or another
nice work

[Dream Weaver]

This is a strong "haiku" Love it!

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Wow an abstract and powerful poem with no blah...blahs. The last line was awesome. I really like this poem. Great job!