Quiet now

Quiet now

A Poem by underwriter

Why do I keep on screaming?

Can they not hear my desperate calls?

As walls crash and fall around me

No one else makes a sound


They whisper now so softly

Lies, un-truths, deceits

I shout once more

Their silence drowns

Me out. They, intending not to be discrete


By underwriter    7/12/2010

© 2011 underwriter


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lots of emotion
well expressed!
Like bunches!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago
more words are not always needed to convey strong emotion. Good write.

:D

Posted 13 Years Ago
So much emotion in such small lines of poetry. I really feel you here. Nice write :))

Posted 13 Years Ago

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