gift from me to you!

Made up in about a minute.

i just made this up. it has some meaning but i think i kinda veered off topic in the last line. i ran out of ideas

Author's Note

You say my writings awesome
And I don't think that its true

The reason why you like it
Its not me its cause of you

Its how you take the emotion out of my writing
And experiencing it yourself all the way until its through

Its not just words and writing
Its a gift from me to you!

Reviews

[Tomislav Petricevic]

"Or you're just lying, b***h!" Haha, just kidding. Nice poem. Keep it up, man.

[Harley (arbiter)]

How did you know?! Lol thanks

[Skia1717]

I like it. Simple, emotional, and it rhymes! :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks

[Sami Khalil]

Cute poem.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks

[Sami Khalil]

:)

[R.A. Youngblood]

You can see the point, clearly. It's very simple, and enjoyable to read.
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up buddy :D

[Harley (arbiter)]

thanks

[R.A. Youngblood]

welcome

[J. F. Charleston]

This is actually very accurate. We share something and we like it for various reasons. It's really awsome how that point came across.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks

[Gazza]

It does have a point and meaning, its what we give each other, writing, a gift. Nicely written, I like how eight lines can communicate so much

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yeah. Thanks

[Gothic Girl]

short yet it gets through your point to the readers. great job! :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

thanks

[Aehr]

i like this! its cute.. well done... :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks

[Melody]

I think it's cute and sweet! I love how short and simple it is. Well written, beautiful. Good job. :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

thanks

[The Watcher]

What an interesting and touching poem. A bit on the short side, but it's still strong and meaningful nonetheless. Great write Harley, and kudos!
100/100

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks

[The Watcher]

You're welcome