A bottle, a gun

You pick up a bottle
Filled with that kind of pill

I pick up a gun
Telling myself to chill

You can't take life anymore
You turn it up and glug

I don't want to live without you
I embed my brain with a slug

Author's Note

short. i know but i think its kinda cool.

Reviews

[David the writer]

Well mehish, idk what about it, but it just didn't seem very good. Now the name A bottle, and a Gun

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks man that's actually pretty good.... yeah man nice

[David the writer]

Thanks bro

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yw

[David the writer]

wut does that mean?

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

your welcome

[David the writer]

Oh, thanx

[Harley (arbiter)]

your welcome

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

:P

[afra]

name well I DONT WANT TO LIVE WITHOUT YOU ....and the poem was amazing ....good job

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Strange, But I like it. It's different, which is awesome! As for a name, I'd say maybe 'Can't live without you'd or 'can't live'

[Harley (arbiter)]

thanks ^_^

[♪The Girl Next Door♪]

No problem