Failure

Failure

A Poem by Harley (arbiter)

I did it again
I'm a failure
Said the wrong thing
Made the wrong turn
Got someone mad
Hurt a friend
I did it again
I should burn
It would make everyone glad
I wouldn't be around
I wouldn't bring everyone down
Like some 1 legged hound
The failure I am
I do give a damn
But my words came out wrong
When I thought them right
Now their gone
Vanished out of sight
My friends
Who I hurt
And pissed off
I should've been more alert
Now I'm listening to a lonely song
And I walk an empty road
Carry my own load
Because I'm a fail
Who's words tumble and bail
I'll hide behind my viel
So no-one will know
Its me
Out of the town I go
I know its real
I can see
My fate I seal
Forever alone I will be
I'm a failure

© 2013 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
I'm sorry

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You're not a failure, even when things don't turn out the way you expected, or you didn't obtain the reaction you expected from someone doesn't make you a failure. I know this isn't as easy as it sounds but try staying strong and don't ever think of yourself as a failure, otherwise that will give you an excuse not to keep fighting and overcome whatever you're struggling with, instead it would make you vulnerable.
I know we haven't talked in a while but if you need some advice, or support do not hesitate to send me a message.

Other than that, I think it was nicely worded!

Posted 11 Years Ago


No one is ever a failure. I feel this way sometimes, though. Well worded.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Like Grayeyes said, you're not a failure. The point is you care and that is enough to make you put things right :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


You're not a failure- even though I don't know you personally, I can nearly bet on that. I'm unsure if I have the right to comment on this, being it seems so deeply personal, but I want to assure you, no one is perfect, but people will forgive you.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Harley (arbiter)
Harley (arbiter)

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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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