from this day fourth

from this day fourth

A Poem by Harley (arbiter)
"

1 against the world

"

from this day fourth i will not falter.  

 from this day fourth i will try harder.

  i will not be stopped by the challenges i face.  

 i will beat death in its manic race.  

 if my time is running short i will power through.  

 but my darling none of this is for you.    

 i do this for me and my own gain.    

 for the only feeling in my life is pian.

© 2012 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
Little weird inspiration. The game HALO. How one spartin is their only hope and etc. Should play it sometime. Also by the stuff I feel right now too.

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Haha, great job! Awesome rhyme scheme and flow, needs a little grammer and punctuation corrections, also in the last line it should be pain, but overall great poem. Nicely worded.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on June 4, 2012
Last Updated on June 11, 2012
Tags: one, against, all, halo, overcome, pain

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Harley (arbiter)
Harley (arbiter)

the age of classic rock , AR



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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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