Going Home

Going Home

A Poem by Laura Ex

Anticipation

      What will it be like?

Anxiety

      Life outside these walls is so different.

Disbelief

      Hearing those words slip from your tongue

Choking

      Is the only sound I can make.

Crumbling

      Down inside, my inner-self is breaking.

Hopelessness

      Consumes me, nothing has changed.

© 2010 Laura Ex


Author's Note

Laura Ex
written while i was in a mental hospital

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Fear is not always an easy emotion to feel or face and I think you're doing a lot of that now, but I don't blame you. Who wouldn't be afraid of going home after going what you went through? A very well-written and emotional piece. I like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow this is very touching and unique write such powerfull emotions and images. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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